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Sunday, September 25, 2011

Culture Clash: What did you cut from your description?

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12 comments:

  1. katedowerSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:28 PM

    test

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  2. weeshynunuSeptember 26, 2011 at 8:02 AM

    I seemed to have started a lot of sentences with "I think..." and those are the things that I need to cut in this paper. I need to add other ways to start the sentences without stating my thoughts or opinions.

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  3. Dino OmerhodzicSeptember 26, 2011 at 8:09 AM

    I started a lot of paragraphs with, " This poem" or "My interpretation" or "My second interpretation is" I need to get rid of these and blend paragraphs together better.

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  4. turtleSeptember 26, 2011 at 8:10 AM

    I liked to say dies a lot. Or I also like to say stupid or dumb. It makes me seem very judgmental.

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  5. Bryon ChristensenSeptember 26, 2011 at 8:15 AM

    I feel like i just need to cut out some of the basic words and branch out and use better more descriptive words

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  6. Yvonne MunaniraSeptember 26, 2011 at 8:17 AM

    I wrote a lot of opinions in my description instead of saving them for the interpretation..

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  7. Mikayla WhitneySeptember 26, 2011 at 11:51 AM

    I needed to make my evaluations more clear.

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  8. samiiboiiSeptember 26, 2011 at 11:52 AM

    I catch myself writing my own opinions quite a bit. I need to make more evaluations

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  9. Matt rSeptember 26, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    I started my positive and negative evaluations the same way.

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  10. Regan SSeptember 26, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    I tend to judge a lot when im writing and dont catch it so, what u said about watching out for what your saying will help me a lot.

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  11. CasemeisterSeptember 26, 2011 at 12:02 PM

    "I catch myself writing my own opinions quite a bit. I need to make more evaluations" ~ SamiiBoii

    I agree with Sam.

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  12. lawilsonSeptember 27, 2011 at 5:19 AM

    I would cut "I think it meant..". I find myself including this A LOT in m papers.

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